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Will you hold me in your arms tonight?
Embrace me under the stars, so bright?
Take away my mind, my soul?
Fill my heart and make me whole?
Let us leave the world tonight,
lose all sense,
the will to fight.

I'm yours, I'm here,
just take me please;
and hold me under the midnight breeze.

For I need you now,
I love you so.
You have my heart,
I can't let go.

You inspire feelings,
that I didn't know exist.
You bring out the best in me,
and your love does so persist.

I can't thank you enough for the way you make me feel,
all I can do is promise you:
That my love is deep and real.
©2007-2009 ~diamondchoc
:icondiamondchoc:

Author's Comments

I wrote this the night me and my boyfriend kissed properly for the first time. I wrote the poem. However- rightfully it's his poem =]

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:iconcat-like-twitch:
ooh its mine is it ^^ thanks :) hehe i love you

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Be happy ^^
:iconariyume:
Awww, I really like it!
Nice sense of rhythm. =)

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xl]:Even though I can't give you happiness, at least I want to be by your side and be able to share your sadness:[lx
:icondiamondchoc:
Thanks =D

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Yeah...I write poems =]
:icontoe-a:
Wow nice job i like how deep it is.

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I'm on a quest to find my brains because the little frogriders took them!
:icondiamondchoc:
Thanks a lot :)

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Yeah...I write poems =]
:iconloversheart:
hmm fits how my day has gone :D

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Here the Tragically Beautiful
And the Beautifully tragic
Drift through this night
In a last Quest for magic
-- trans-siberian orchestra "the lost christmas eve"
:icontoe-a:
:D

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I'm on a quest to find my brains because the little frogriders took them!

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